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silentone
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Silent within
Sep 29th, 2007 at 8:40pm
 
I feel so all alone today
I walk and walk but hardly a word do utter
I have friends all around and yet I have a frown
Is this my doom to be this way
Will it get better

I may not know all the answers and sometimes I don't understand
Why is this happeinging to me
Will I be stuck forever

I try to change myself and even please others
But I seem to be falling farther into this pit
A deep dark whole that is within me
Could it be like this ever

I want to be free
Safe and Secure
Happy and Joyous
But I am in this whole and find it hard to climb out
All I want to do is get out

I am stuck and each time I think I have a secure anchor to clasp on and get out
I only find it to my detriment that it is loose and I am stumbling backwards again.

Help me Help me Help me

Please please please

Laughter all around and I am stuck in a frown
I fell in this dark whole and the opening is getting smaller and harder to get out
I feel that I could shout
And no one would hear me through town

My heart has been crushed
my dreams have been shattered
will life get better
or will it always be like this for here on after.
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revenna
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Re: Silent within
Reply #1 - Sep 30th, 2007 at 11:59am
 
Silentone,

What a beautiful poem!  I'm sorry for the sadness and despair that you are feeling, but I'm glad you have such a beautiful way of expressing it.  Yes, I hear you.  And so do the others here at this site.  We are listening.

Rev
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Re: Silent within
Reply #2 - Oct 6th, 2007 at 3:39pm
 
Embarrassed

i really felt your poem. i have been reading silently for awhile and just not responding, but I felt i needed to tell you that your courage is inspiring and i was deeply touched by your writing. Know that you are not alone in your struggles. You'll be in my thoughts and prayers....thank you
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