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Lingering (Read 5455 times)
Sojourner
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eeyore
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Lingering
Nov 3
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, 2006 at 1:05am
Lingering in the darkness
Scared to make a sound
Holding myself close
Praying not to be found
Shaking in the stillness
Catching every breath
Knowing in my mind
My voice could be my death
Hurting in the coldness
Feeling numb inside
Sorrow fills the void
There is nowhere to hide
Jenna
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If you do get fearful, close your eyes, have your mind reach deep within, wish for the first thing that comes to mind...Now listen carefully, YOU MUST WISH FOR WHAT YOU WANT RATHER THAN WHAT YOU FEAR!
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Re: Lingering
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Nov 8
th
, 2006 at 6:49pm
Although this is a poem that evokes sadness and despair, your words express your feelings so beautifully, so intensely and perfectly... we are amazingly creative as survivors...so manyb "gifted" individuals here! Thanks for sharing this with us.
xx Matanah
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In Loving Light,&&Matanah
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, 2006 at 1:42am
Thank you Matanah,
Writing is a huge release for me sometimes. Yes, we do have many creative and talented people here.
Jenna
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If you do get fearful, close your eyes, have your mind reach deep within, wish for the first thing that comes to mind...Now listen carefully, YOU MUST WISH FOR WHAT YOU WANT RATHER THAN WHAT YOU FEAR!
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Dec 7
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, 2006 at 5:17pm
Jenna,
I can relate so well to your words and your fear.
I am sorry.
Perhaps here can be a safe place for you to come and just be, without needing to hide.
You are safe now Jenna. I hope you can believe that.
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I am always more than my struggles
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Dec 16
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, 2006 at 4:38pm
Your poem seems so sad but oddly enough it brings strength to me just to know I am not alone. I have been on a destructive path for awhile and I'm struggling to find my way back home. Thank you for sharing these words here.
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"And then the day came when the pain it took to remain tight in a bud became greater than the pain it took to blossom" &&&&* You don't love a woman because she is beautiful, she is beautiful because you love her *&&&&
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