This sounds like a bunch of jumbled thoughts to me, I really need to work on it, but here's what I have so far:

Disequilibrium

You tore me to pieces
Then smooth out the creases
You shouldn't have left me alive

You revel in sickness
With no one to witness
You shouldn't have left me alive

You're out of excuses
Your reasons are useless
Nowhere to retreat to;
It's come back to eat you

You thought you could hide
From the monster inside
Well, it looks like you're dying
And no one is crying

So why are you laughing
When everything's crashing
You shouldn't have left me alive

And believe it or not,
Now I leave you to rot--
You shouldn't have left me alive.

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Any suggestions would be helpful.

Thanks,

~Monica

Very good. I like it tho it's sad.
How have you been lately anyway? Haven't talked to you in ages, I'm back online now, so IM me or email whenever.
Love,
Chantell