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Message started by serenity_seeker2007 on Aug 23rd, 2007 at 7:25pm

Title: The Allure
Post by serenity_seeker2007 on Aug 23rd, 2007 at 7:25pm
The Allure

Wrapped in suffering.
Stroked with terror.
Caressed with lies.
Cold scales upon me.
Broken nails against my thighs.

Beyond pain. Beyond fear.
You can't visit me here.
I beg for seduction.
And smear my soul
Into the alure.

Sinister whispers in the night.
Rob me of my will to fight.
To surrender to something other than you.
One of the demons.
There are more than a few.

This terrible beauty.
This penence of soul.
This place where I land
When I loose all control.
When I loose myself.


Feeling dark....lost in darkness....

Title: Re: The Allure
Post by Ines on Aug 23rd, 2007 at 11:09pm
The poetry you post is very powerful, but it might be a good idea to indicate somewhere who wrote it, or where you found it.  As an artist myself, I know that I would like to be credited if my work were to be posted on the net by someone other than myself.  Just a thought...  

http://www.aardvarc.org/rytin/

Title: Re: The Allure
Post by serenity_seeker2007 on Aug 24th, 2007 at 8:50pm
yes, thank you very much. i did find it on another site but forgot to add it to the bottom before i posted. i do hope others will look up the site and check it out. it is very powerful. again, thank you

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